Hello everyone! My name is Lilia Paz. I finished my major in Economics. Some years ago I watched on TV a Korean drama and I liked it very much, and I liked how the music sounded and the voice of singer so I became interested in a Korean music, drama and culture, now I´m learning the Korean language, I hope at the end of this year take the exam for certification of Korean level for foreigners so I need to study hard.
I hope at the end of semester write English more easily, without many grammar mistakes, to organize ideas and choose the better words to express my ideas correctly, and I think it will help in Spanish too. With the course I am motivated to write and learn more.
Dear Lilia, please check some points in your paragraph. First "I finished my major" (not "I'm finished". Capitalize this words always: Korean, English and Economics. Check the following phrases: "how the music sounded", "I became interested", "I´m learning Korean or the Korean Language, "I hope at the end of the semestertoI write English more easily...", "grammar mistakes", "to express my ideas correctly", "It will help", "I am motivated (or willing) to write and learn more."
ReplyDeleteSorry, I forgot to tell you "drama" is always singular.
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