This semester, I expect to learn techniques that make more easy to write a formal text, and maybe this helps me to realize that making a thesis will not be too difficult.
Friday, February 7, 2014
Luis Aguilar
Hi! I'm Luis. I'm studying Computer Engineering, and this is my tenth semester; therefore, I'm a fossil. I'm thinking in my thesis' topic, but I would prefer another graduation method. I like to play football(both), but I didn't play in any team rigth now. I like to play videogames and I really enjoy to meet people that know how to play because I really like the challenges. Also i like to play cards, but i don't like to bet because it causes a lot of problems.
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Dear Luis, check my suggestions:
ReplyDelete1. "I like to play " Better:I like playing , because you are talking about a a routine, you are not referring to any specific time or ocasion. Same: "I like to play videogames.".
2. "I don´t (not didn´t) play in a team right know
3. "I" is always written with capital letter.
4. "to make easier (not more easy)